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The Divide

Where ancient oceans once met land
became a modern moment of bliss

shielded from the sun by a blanket of stars
in the darkness they shared their first kiss

The chill of the night slowly melted away
as the hope in her heart set aflame

our bodies entranced by the fires within
Through a whisper on her lips came his name...
©2007-2008 ~Twilight-Pixel
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I was in a really sappy mood, and hadn't written any poetry in years. It's cheesy, but I like it anyway. :)

A kiss goes out to my Captain.
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~natespixie:iconnatespixie: Oct 1, 2007, 1:49:13 PM
I like it too :)

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~Twilight-Pixel:iconTwilight-Pixel: Oct 1, 2007, 1:51:37 PM
Thank you very much! :)
~AzureWitch:iconAzureWitch: Oct 1, 2007, 2:23:08 PM
:D Sappy is as sappy does :P
Which is not to say, (entirely) that you, yourself are sappy, moreover that you embody the aspect of sappiness outrightly, but rather to note your apparent aptitude for the creation of profound sappiness. :D

I really like it!
The two-line form factor is pretty appealing to me. I like how each pair brings you a little closer from the universal down to the particular, kindof introspectively.
~Twilight-Pixel:iconTwilight-Pixel: Oct 1, 2007, 4:02:45 PM
Yes, I'm glad that I embody sappiness, that it has manifested itself in my very being so that I may procure such writings of sappy-dripping poetry...and...stuff.

Thanks! First one in awhile, ya know? Very nifty...I'm glad you picked up on that...I tried to write another axiomatic, but I couldn't think of how to...it escaped me this time.