The Divide
Where ancient oceans once met land
became a modern moment of bliss
shielded from the sun by a blanket of stars
in the darkness they shared their first kiss
The chill of the night slowly melted away
as the hope in her heart set aflame
our bodies entranced by the fires within
Through a whisper on her lips came his name...













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"May you walk in the light, embrace the dark, and in the twilight find your way."
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Which is not to say, (entirely) that you, yourself are sappy, moreover that you embody the aspect of sappiness outrightly, but rather to note your apparent aptitude for the creation of profound sappiness.
I really like it!
The two-line form factor is pretty appealing to me. I like how each pair brings you a little closer from the universal down to the particular, kindof introspectively.
Thanks! First one in awhile, ya know? Very nifty...I'm glad you picked up on that...I tried to write another axiomatic, but I couldn't think of how to...it escaped me this time.
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